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I was different than most of the pokemon fans I have seen. I got into pokemon around the time of Heartgold and Soulsilver. Soulsilver was a surprise Christmas present that I got one year. I started playing it and I couldn't stop! That is, until Pokemon Black and White came out. I was ecstatic when I heard all about the new game. When I got pokemon black, I instantly dropped Soulsilver and got started on the new game. I all of it! Everything was way better than Soulsilver, and I even got a crush on the character, N. I used to have a crush on Red, but everything I had done on Soulsilver seemed to vanish, except my love of the pokemon I had in the game. I eventually wanted to bring my beloved pokemon from Soulsilver into Pokemon Black, so I tried my hardest as possible to beat the Elite Four.


One day, after three tries to beat the Elite Four and loosing, I decided to go back to my Soulsilver for some nostalgia. After starting up the game and skipping past the intro, I looked at the start screen… and it seemed off. I ignored the feeling, thinking that it was because I just hadn't played the game in a while. I got up on my saved game and I saw that I was in Ecruteak City. Then I remembered that all I had to do was defeat Red, and then I would be finished with the game. So I then flew to Victory Road on my Crobat, Crowbar, because I wanted to save my effort for trekking up Mt. Silver. Then I flew to the Mt. Silver Pokemon Center. I walked into the pokemon center because I thought it wouldn't hurt to heal my pokemon once more before I went up the mountain.  It seemed normal at first, but then I realized that no one was there. At all. There were also parts of the main room that were redder than they usually are. I got worried and ran out of the pokemon center, coming face to face with Blue. Or at least I thought it was Blue. He was covered with red stuff. Then, text flashed up on the screen.

"Blue: You, why do you seem so familiar…"

"I remember now! You're the one…"

"YOU'RE THE REASON HE DID THIS TO ME!"

Then we went into a battle and I got a good look at Blue. He wasn't a pretty sight.


There were what looked like deep gauges in his chest and arms. He was slightly bent, with a hand on his knee, like he was about to fall over. His face had scratches all over it and his eyes were wide open. Although, the thing that scared me the most was his expression. He looked sad, angry, scared and confused all at the same time. And he was covered with red stuff, like before. Then it dawned on me. The pokemon center, Blue, all that red coloring… was… blood. I started to freak out, trying to tell myself that it was just a game. What had happened to him? Blue had sent out a level 52 Eevee, and I saw that its health was dangerously low. All of my pokemon had extremely high levels, so I didn't worry about it too much. Although, as I looked closer at the Eevee, I realized it looked like Blue, as it had all the same gauges and scratches as he did. Including all of the blood.


My Umbreon, Shadow, had come out to battle. It was taking longer to defeat Blue's Eevee than I had expected, because all of Shadow's attacks either weren't very effective and did little damage, or a text box appeared to say "Shadow was too afraid to attack!". Afraid of what? Luckily, Shadow lost little health because of the Eevee's level, and because of the same message appearing for the Eevee. Also, Blue would come in every time I landed a hit and say stuff like, "I don't get it…", "I was just coming to visit…", "Why did he do it?", "I thought I was his friend…", and "This problem must be resolved.".


Eventually I won, and I returned to the overworld sprites. Blue said, "Kendel, you have to go to Red. Go solve this." Then, the screen went black and in red letters it said, "Blue has died." It returned to the overworld sprites. Blue was lying on the ground, with his Eevee beside him. The Eevee took a few steps and stopped. The screen went black again and it said, "Eevee has died." How did Blue know my real name? I didn't use it as my in game trainer name! I couldn't believe that Blue and his Eevee just died. That doesn't happen in pokemon, they just faint! Did something happen with Red? The thoughts just kept coming, but all I knew was that I had to see what was going on with Red and avenge Blue. So I started to head up the mountain.


As I got closer and closer to the mountain, there were less pokemon encounters and more splotches of blood on the ground and the trees. At the base of the mountain, all I saw was blood and more dead pokemon among the tall grass. I thought I was going to faint, but I knew I had to get up the mountain to go see Red, so I kept it together and started up Mt. Silver. When I made it to the top, I saw Red waiting there. When I got within 5 steps of him, an exclamation point appeared over his head and he came over. He said, "Kendel! You're back! I missed you so much! Where were you? Did you miss me? He he… I know you did. Blue said that I should forget about you, can you believe it? But I would never do that, no, never. Hey, do you like what I did? Yes/No" He did all of this? All those pokemon on the mountain, the pokemon center, Eevee… and Blue was all his doing. I instantly said no. Now I wish I hadn't. "Y-you … don't?" I felt so hurt inside. "Wait, are you seeing someone else? It's that N guy, isn't it? How could you? I thought we had something special!" I started to feel really bad. I didn't know why, but I did. "I'll teach you to not to mess with my heart!" Then a battle started.


Red's sprite was horrifying. He was carrying a Charzard head and hugging it close to his chest. He had a knife in his pocket and he was covered with blood. His eyes were open wide and he had an evil smile. He sent out his Pikachu. It was very thin and covered with blood. It looked so sad and scared. Its level was 100 and its nickname was Kendel. That was creepy, but not surprising. I had sent out Shadow. Even though Kendel was low on health, it didn't matter. I couldn't even land a single hit. The same message that came up when I battled Blue showed up every time I tried to fight. I thought it might just be Shadow.


Kendel used a strange move, Heart Break. I heard Shadow emit a sad cry and its health bar dropped a lot. Kendel then used another strange move, Betrayal. Another sad cry came from Shadow and his health dropped to zero. Shadow's sprite then faded.

"Shadow has died of a broken heart."

I was so sad. I felt like I lost a part of me.

The same happened for my other 4 pokemon. Crowbar, Rage, my Gyarados, Runner, my Rapidash, and Mindless, my Dodrio all died of a broken heart. Next was my Typhlosion, Sin.

"No!" I cried out. I didn't want to lose him. I couldn't lose him. He was a part of me.

Red answered. "Oh really? Well I'll show you the nice person that I am and give you another chance. Will you love me forever? Yes/No" I was afraid that if I said no, he would kill Sin and do something worse to me. I said yes.

Red let me go and all my pokemon were perfectly healthy and alive.

"Red: Don't forget our date tomorrow! Right here, seven!"


I couldn't live anymore. I couldn't see anyone without his permission. Even if I could, I always saw him. He is everywhere. But no one believes me. They all think I'm crazy. They told me to stop playing pokemon. That just made him angry. They all died the next day. Then the others thought it was me. Thank you Red, you've made me so happy.


"You're welcome Kendel. Anything for my love."
Warning: contains blood and death.

Yay my first Creepypasta! its finally finished! Hope you like it.
I do have those pokemon in the game to a degree. there not nearly a high level and Runner is a Ponyta. Idk why i put that down.

Plz comment. Fanart would be great, and if you do plz comment with a link, cuz i would luv to see it!

I don't own Pokemon, nor any of their characters.
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trashyart12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2017  New Deviant Student General Artist
10/10. I love how creepy it is, and I personally love how all this happens in a game, then comes into real life! Great job on the detail!!
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CloakedBadger Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2017
hmm. It was pretty good, though it could use some work. You maybe try to rely a little less on gore for a scare, because other than that, (no offence) it wasn't that scary.
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Fe4th3r Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
should have just used a save state
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Mirmirskye12 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wasnt gonna read this. But I'm gladi did
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Zorana-PokemonDragon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My........
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InkyArtz Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Horrifying....but somehow in a good way XD
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SyrusAlpha Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
Jelly much Red.
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ThePsychicTraveler Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
So touching and horrifying... I absolutely loved it!
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Cosmic-Powers Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
Wow.
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BudoKin-UV-ruv Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
this affects me in bad ways
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Spirito666 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This creepypasta is smart.
It shows us how we mustn't forget the characters we once loved
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Flintpokemaster718 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017
ok
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Oinkypigface Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016
I just thought this was a story of how you got into the pokemon fandom
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Mirmirskye12 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same
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PikaFan42896 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
uhg is it just me or do i find this ship kinda off
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Theonebg98 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016
This made me go through a ton of different emotions . Ending with scared
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Made me thing on people in real Life or on facebook,just because we are friends they say "I love you! Why don't you love me?!" And harcelate you of messages. Some look like of moral harassment..... Well its exactly that sort of boy Red is in this story. But 10X Worst. Oh, Red...*slap his cheek * ! 

.... 
After this action I don't regret to do this. I do not feel guilty at all. 
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XenoNoobFox Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
Omg i got in to it at heartgold and soulsilver too :3
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Little9tails Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2016
Omg... the heck did I read...?
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randomfandoms175 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2016
Wow...wh-why don't you just burn the cartridge? I mean...if you dystroy the origin of red, then...he'll...he'll...he'll be...
Unknown source:D-E-A-D-!-!-!
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randomfandoms175 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2016
Sorry...
Unknown source:D-E-A-D-!-!-!
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randomfandoms175 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2016
AGAIN?!! Uh...third time is the charm!
Unknown source D-E-A-D-!-!-!
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GaryOak127 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh! My Blue!
Please, please bring him back! He can't die! He just can't! And neither can Eevee!!!
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RushtMach Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016
Well then. 0.0 I don't know how to feel about this...Weirded out? Freaked the F*ck out? Maybe, I dunno man. That was really good though!
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Xion180 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
That was awesome!!!
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godcat141 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016  Student Artist
its pretty good! besides the spelling mistakes... 
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Chibiwarrior865 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Student Artist
Cool
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119911 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
I enjoyed reading this.
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Flintpokemaster718 Featured By Owner May 4, 2016
that's so horrible
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pastful Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
cute
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Skyilere Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Intense. I used to be okay with Red of the manga,but now whenever I look at his drawing I see a knife sticking out somewhere. Man,thanks.
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Timeparasox Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016
too short. a sequel would be cool though.
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powerdestroyer Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
wow this is good stuff
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le-gusta-guy Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016
... Jesus... there goes Pokemon for me...
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G-ROSE-SWAG-MLP Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Well, this kinda ended well. Like it :)
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oO-GingerSnap173-Oo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and then a skeleton popped out!
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lovegameing321 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
niceGrey Kit Emoticon-Bye 
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kawaii-neko-goddess Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2016
 got this from you. now im returning it. WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed...
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Spammers are idiots, just so your non-existing brain 
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Arc-Fire Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2016  Student General Artist
When you put in the part where the parents died, I was freaked out. Good Creepypasta there! :D
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icerust Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015
This just seems like a gory fanfiction ._.
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Baeporeon Featured By Owner Edited Dec 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no offense but i'd try and make the story a bit more realistic
like the part where they know your real name is kinda.. stupid
and then red and his eevee dying just seemed to happen really quickly almost like you rushed into it you know?
also the part where he can basically see what you're doing is just kinda dumb
and where the peeps who told you to stop playing die? it's just too unrealistic
and yes i know creepypastas are fake but stories are much more enjoyable when they seem a bit more real if you get what i'm saying
very good for your first one though!
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HiddenLeafPokemon Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thank you very much for your constructive criticism! 
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Baeporeon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah no problem <3 i hope i didn't sound rude i was just saying things to improve and stuff :3
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Aquaeevee29 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CREEPY!!!!
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diancie101 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
WTF THAT WAS SO F-D UP YOU ARE A TOTAL SICKO!
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crazynoggin Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thats kinda the point of a creepypasta
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epic-lalito05 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Student Artist
I love the story! it was... Dark, and WTF its just weird "Die" heck i always wanted that instead of "gym leader f***ing #3 of johto Died" or "Miltank DIED" because i dont even like her being even alive! my true satisfaction comes from killing her.
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HiddenLeafPokemon Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you liked it!
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epic-lalito05 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Student Artist
please in more creepypastas use the word DIE it makes it much more DARK!
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Segaguy512 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
When i  started playing soulsilver after a long time-
Me:GOTOREDGOTOREDGOTORED........Or i will die!Pervy Pinkiplier 
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